always be brave and strong, no matter how hard it is
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sargentsquirrel- Chris Jones « Thread Started on Sept 22, 2007, 5:14pm »
Real Name: Chris Flowers CHERUB Name: Chris Jones Gender: Male Nickname/s: Dr. Jones/Chrisneth/ The Great Chris Birthdate: June 27,1993 Birthplace:
Backstreets of Barnes, London
Hair Colour: browny black Likes:
most sport, warhammer, Eminem, Girls, South Park, magic tricks, subtilty, dogs, Chelsea, cars, street racing
Dislikes:
Chavs, over-the-top actors, most T.V programs that doesn't have anything "sick" or "cool", leather jackets, skateboarding,cyclists that are carzy and drive in the centre of the road, rollerbladers, cats and Arsenal
Eye Colour: dark Blue Height/Build:
stocky, medium build, reasonably tall for his age
Other distiguishing physical features:
scar on hand from a knife juggling accident
History:
When he was 7, he began to take a liking to magic tricks. Unfortunantly, he performed one wrongly and was rushed to hospital after getting a really bad gash near his wrist from a knife. His parents- John Flower and Natalie Flower- ran their own shop which was a small newsagents before they were killed by a robber who then stole all their money. He spent 3 weeks in an orphanage before a Cherub agent picked him up.
He passed basic training on his first attempt and thrived at CHERUB. He had a succesful string of missions so far, but has had a few near misses on one or two
Strengths:
He is very good with computers which make people think of him differently sometimes. He is very sporty and thus has a great build. His acedemic skills is science Is outstanding, even for CHERUB standards.
Weaknesses:
His ability of a magician sometimes makes him rather shy, for people jeer at him. He can find it tough to fit in with "hard people/ chavs" on missions and is xtremly reluctant to. He likes to wonder for often, he's extremmly bored
General Appearance:
scar on hand, quite likes to talk to friends, sometimes takes things very seriously. His height is roughly 5'5 in feet and people say his eyes are bluer than the depths of the sea
Other details:
friends taught him how to drive already, had rather harsh upbringing. He takes a particular interest in Martial arts and is one of the best on campus. He likes to have loyal friends, if anyone is a friend of his but doesn't act like it aound other people, he just doesn't bother. His interest in girls is great for before CHERUB, he was always beaten up by boys. He has quite a few boys who are his friends, but he sometimes feels a lot more relaxed around girls. He gets angry when other boys accuse him of being a pervert because of this
Re: sargentsquirrel- Chris Jones « Reply #3 on Sept 22, 2007, 6:26pm »
Clcik the 'modify' button in the top left hand corner of your post, and edit as appropriate.
I would suggest grouping his academic weaknesses into one, and adding another, so the character doesn't seem too perfect. Lengthen History, and run a spellcheck.
always be brave and strong, no matter how hard it is
Joined: Aug 2007 Gender: Male Posts: 96 Location: london
Re: sargentsquirrel- Chris Jones « Reply #4 on Sept 22, 2007, 6:53pm »
Quote:
Clcik the 'modify' button in the top left hand corner of your post, and edit as appropriate.
I would suggest grouping his academic weaknesses into one, and adding another, so the character doesn't seem too perfect. Lengthen History, and run a spellcheck.
what I mean is how else to improve it, sorry if I didn't make it clear
Re: sargentsquirrel- Chris Jones « Reply #5 on Sept 22, 2007, 6:58pm »
Oh, sorry.
Erm, the weaknesses are much better, just go into detail with the history. e.g:
His parents were shopowners
His parents, who owned a business, (Forward Planning Flowers) made a little bit of money. They were killed when their shop was robbed and they attempted to stop the criminals.
Pete got out of the mini bus onto the warm glittering sand. He spread his towel, which had RUGBY RULES on it, on the sun baked sand and put his sun glasses on and lay down letting the sound of the sea take away his worries and the sun heat him